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This is an essay I did for English class, and was considered the best out of all the classes:
The one job I would absolutely, positivly refuse to do, is to act or direct in the porn industry.
I have alot of respect toward women, and I think it is disgusting to have women perform such acts. We grow up in a society where men are suppossed to like the exposure of women, but not me.
I don't like the fact that women degrade themselves in front of cameras to get money, when they are smart enough to be doing better, less shameful things.
It's embarrassing to think that people would actually use a women's body; the greatest peice of art on the planet, as entertainment.
I would never let a women do that, because a women should decide on her own whom to share her body with, hopefully with someone she trully loves, be that a man or a women. And, I think it would be better to be with a women, because a woman knows how to treat a woman, and, some men don't fully understand how to properly treat women.